Finish Your Book

Focus on your book. Amidst upheaval and uncertainty,
you still have a story to tell.
Gift yourself time and editorial support.

AUGUST 16 - 20 2020 (virtual retreat)
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Your rebirth begins in...
Rebirth Your Book Virtual Writing Retreat 2020 Rediscover your novel or memoir and your desire for the page.
A full manuscript evaluation
A retreat limited to four writers.
A revival of your creative self
"Allison, working with you and the retreat have totally transformed me
as a writer...at last, I know where I'm going with this book."

Amy Evrard Young

The Rebirth Difference

Four focused days with editorial guidance, accountability, and a concrete finish-your-book plan.
Your Own Safe Location

Virtual Retreat

4 days/4 nights

August 16th - 20th, 2020
USA Daytime Hours

Personal Guidance

Allison K Williams, "The Unkind Editor" provides editorial feedback & coaching throughout the week




Virtual Retreat

Write Where You Are

A Virtual Retreat

Attend this retreat from any quiet, focused location with internet access. Writing in Company, special-subject webinars, personal coaching and social time happens via Zoom. Send your pages for overnight feedback via email. We'll send a Do Not Disturb sign for your door.

The Itinerary

If Time & Resources Allow

Add Your Own Retreat Location
Airbnb Your own place
Expedia local hotel deals
VRBO Farther Afield
Rediscover Your Writing Self Stay in safety and comfort.
Connect with fellow writers.
Channel quarantine energy into your book.
It's New Draft Time.

Understand The Experience

From idea to novel; proposal to memoir.

Your pre-retreat manuscript evaluation includes supportive, specific, written critique of your current draft or proposal, a coaching session, and a customized work plan for your retreat.

During our time together, you'll have daily guidance and one-on-one sessions.

A post-retreat work plan and follow-up coaching session help you sustain momentum in the weeks to come.

To give the personal coaching and specific editorial feedback your manuscript needs before, during and after the retreat, participation is limited to four writers.

Each morning, writers set intentions for this reserved time, then work individually, with or without their Zoom window active. Allison provides individual guidance as needed. Post-writing check-ins affirm your work, and may include short readings, but this is not a "workshop." It's like writing at your favorite cafe—with your personal editor on-call.

After a lunch break, we'll meet for a special-topics webinar, followed by personal coaching time.

Focused time and a committment to "show up" helps you plow through pages.

Direct, specific feedback helps you write better.

Rebirth Your Book combines dedicated time with personal editorial assistance. You'll have a work plan to start writing on day one. Need feedback on today's pages? Lost your plot thread? Ask Allison right now—she's across the virtual table.

Pre-arrival session with editorial feedback and your work plan for the retreat.

Scheduled one-on-one time to discuss your draft-in-progress and writing goals. (Allison's available for informal chats and questions all day long.)

Follow-up coaching session to sustain your writing momentum back home.

The Virtual Retreat happens in your place of safety. Allison can help you strategize to create a calm, supportive writing environment.

Your Itinerary

This Week You'll Finish A Draft
Chapter 1: Welcome to the Retreat August 16th, 2020—All Times USA Eastern
1:00PM
Welcome Session Get to Know Each Other & Our Books
Social Time and Casual Reading
2:30PM
Set Retreat Intentions
Chapter 2: And So It Begins August 17, 2020—All Times USA Eastern
10:00AM
Writing In Company Check In & Write
12:45PM
Check In—How Was Writing?
1:00PM
Lunch break On Your Own
2:00PM
Special Topics Webinar: Book Proposals An hour of the industry with Q&A
3:00PM
One-on-One Time As Scheduled
Chapter 3: The Write Way August 18th, 2020—All Times USA Eastern
10:00AM
Writing In Company Check In & Write
12:45PM
Check In—How Was Writing?
1:00PM
Lunch break On Your Own
2:00PM
Special Topics Webinar: Platform Building An hour of the industry with Q&A
3:00PM
One-on-One Time As Scheduled
Chapter 4: Word by Word August 19th, 2020—All Times USA Eastern
10:00AM
Writing In Company Check In & Write
12:45PM
Check In—How Was Writing?
1:00PM
Lunch break On Your Own
2:00PM
Special Topics Webinar: Querying An hour of the industry with Q&A
3:00PM
One-on-One Time As Scheduled
Chapter 5: Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow August 20th 2020—All Times USA Eastern
10:00AM
Writing In Company Check In & Write
12:45PM
Check In—How Was Writing?
1:00PM
Farewell Lunch And Casual Reading
Return to your life...
...and write some more! (or take a day off)

Partners

Writing Around the World
Special Package
$ 1875

payment plans available

  • Full MS Evaluation: $1350+
  • Pre-arrival coaching: $135
  • Two One-on-One Sessions: $270
  • Editor on call: $425
  • Work plan & follow-up: $135
  • Query Letter, Synopsis & first pages review: $200
  • RETREAT VALUE: $2715

Frequently Asked Questions

You probably have a few

Joining the Retreat

it starts with one call

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You should be working on a book.

It can be a novel, a memoir or an essay collection. It can be an outline or proposal and some material, a partial manuscript, or a draft that isn't singing yet.

  • You're ready for direct and specific feedback about your work.
  • You're writing in English, because Allison isn't fluent enough to edit in any other language.
  • You DON'T need a degree in writing (or anything else!).
  • You DON'T need previous publication credits.

Everyone focuses on their own pages, so the experience level of your fellow writers isn't a big factor in your work.

Some writers come with drafts for revision; others arrive with an idea and notes. If your work is still very much in-progress, we'll use the retreat to generate as much of a first draft as possible. In that case, the manuscript evaluation will happen after the retreat and guide you into the next draft.

Allison will help you strategize around children, partners and pets. If resources allow, consider a local hotel or Airbnb.

Your Time & Tech

log in and get writing

Your own computer and internet connection. On our first day, you'll have a Zoom orientation. You'll be able to chat privately with Allison and other retreat attendees, as well as signaling when you need attention during Writing In Company.

If you need feedback on pages, simply email them to Allison—she'll get them right away.

If you have accessibility concerns, let us know. We'll work with whatever technology you need to make the virtual retreat work for you.

Allison has worked with writers who are d/Deaf, hearing-impaired, blind, visually-impaired, neuro-atypical and with physical disabilities. She wants to work with you—let's discuss how to make it an excellent experience.

You're responsible for your own food throughout the retreat. We'll have some scheduled coffee-and-chat times, and you're always fine to snack on camera during Zoom chats.

Retreat Days

write, relax, write some more

Everyone works on their own manuscript with the energy of a shared virtual writing space. As Allison says, "If I'm writing with a buddy and I start to get bored or frustrated, I look up and think, I can't quit now—she's still going!"

At the beginning of each session, we set our intentions for the day. We take a short stretch break at the halfway point. Afterwards, each person shares how their work went and may—but doesn't have to—read a short passage for brief feedback.

Throughout Writing In Company time, Allison will be available to talk through problems, suggest new ways to tackle a tough section, or give you a quick exercise to shake your writing loose. You can send a chat request any time.

Nope. While reading group members' work in advance and noting points for discussion is a valuable practice, it's not what we're doing here. Your focus is on your book.

Allison will read each writer's full draft (or pile of material or proposal) before arrival, and send you an editorial letter with feedback on concept, voice, themes, plot, story, character and craft. After the evaluation, you'll have an editorial session of about 30 minutes to discuss your work and what you want to accomplish during the retreat. If you're at an early stage and don't have a lot of pages, we can extend the call to discuss your idea, execution and process. During the retreat, you'll have two scheduled one-on-one meetings to discuss how the work is going, your writing in general and your writing career. This time can also be used for query feedback or discussing your publication goals.

Throughout the retreat we'll have plenty of casual chatting time, and you're welcome to start/participate in writing-related discussions with Allison and/or your fellow writers just about anywhere.

After returning home, you'll have another 30-minute editorial call to check in and address questions or new challenges as you finish your draft.

You'll also receive feedback on your query, first pages and synopsis.

To give each writer the individual and specific attention their manuscript needs, the retreat is limited to four people plus Allison.

Booking & Payment

let's work with your budget

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We accept Mastercard, Visa and American Express through PayPal. You may also choose to pay by check, Zelle or direct deposit. Payments can be made as follows:

  • $500 Deposit on acceptance to reserve your place
  • $475 Payment 90 days prior to start date
  • $475 Payment 60 days prior to start date
  • $425 Balance due 30 days prior to start date

Or talk to us about a plan that works for you.

If you prefer to pay in one transaction, we offer a 5% discount for payment in full via check, Zelle or direct deposit within two weeks of acceptance.

Rebirth Your Book participates in AWP's Kurt Brown Prize, which awards $500 each year to emerging writers in fiction, poetry, and creative nonfiction who wish to attend a writers’ conference, center, retreat, festival, or residency. Winners and six finalists also receive a one-year individual membership in AWP. For more information, visit the AWP website.

Before You Arrive:

  • Full read and editorial feedback on your manuscript draft or work so far (a $1350+ value!).
  • Initial call to discuss your work and goals for your Rebirth Your Book time, and answer any travel questions.

During the Retreat:

  • Two focused one-on-one meetings to discuss your work.
  • Access to Allison for additional questions, feedback on pages, and talk about your writing career
  • Three Special Topics Webinars to get to know the publishing industry
  • Daily Writing In Company time

Returning Home:

  • Work plan to finish your draft.
  • Follow-up session 2-4 weeks after returning, to sustain and support your writing momentum.
  • A personal review of your query, synopsis and first pages.

  • Your daily breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks
  • Travel and accommodations
  • Access to Allison after 5PM Eastern Time

If you are unable to attend and we can fill your place from the waitlist, we will refund your tuition on a pro rata basis:


If you have not submitted your manuscript:
you may apply your $500 deposit to another Rebirth Your Book retreat, and you will be refunded any additional payments.


If your initial manuscript read has taken place and you have paid at least $1450:
we will still schedule your two coaching sessions and Work Plan, and you will be refunded payments over $1450. It may be possible to apply your $500 deposit to another retreat on a case-by-case basis.


If we can’t fill your place:
we’ll provide you with documentation to support a claim to your travel insurance provider, but any payments made are nonrefundable. If you have paid at least $1450, you will still receive your manuscript read and coaching sessions.


Refunds will be sent within 30 days of receipt of notice of cancellation.


Rebirth Your Book reserves the right to cancel the retreat in the event of civil unrest, natural disaster or Act of God. In the event of cancellation of the retreat in its entirety, you will receive a full refund of any fees paid. You agree to release Rebirth Your Book and its agents and/or representatives from any liability, including consequential expenses you may have incurred in planning to attend. We will provide you with documentation to support a claim to your travel insurance provider for flights and other expenses not paid to Rebirth Your Book.

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